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I was visited each night by a ghostly lady,
But fear she did not instil in me.
I saw sorrow and torment in her eyes
Of something she knew could not be

She watched as I pretended to dream,
She worried as I pretended to sleep.
She wanted to love the Mortal Man,
Whose troubles ran soul deep.

She burned a kiss with frozen lips.
Caressed with Icy fingertips.
I was chilled to the bone, numbed with pain
But I did not wince, I did not cry
For pain reminded me I was still alive

She was the Object of my desire
She was the essence of my dreams
I would have worshiped her like a goddess
I would have treated her like a queen.
©2007-2010 *JolanthusTrel
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Something I wrote when I realised a relationship was not going to work, no matter how bad we wanted it to happen.

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:iconartheeria:
very, very sweet. :hug:

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"If you can't be the best, than just be useful. Otherwise, I'll have to kill you."
~Assirra Xorlarrin
:icontigerlily4111:
I always loved that one. My favorite Johnnie B work.
:iconchristie20052001:
"She burned a kiss with frozen lips" Wow. Absolutely love that line. Good job! :)

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*poof* trixie disappeared......
me:*laughs evily* I love being the DM :D
:iconjolanthustrel:
Thanks =D yeah, I think it's one of my favourite lines too

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Love burns, Ale Burns, Fire Burns, Politics burns... but life is cold without them.

Remember Kids. Growing old is mandatory, growing up is optional. :boogie::dance:
:iconjolanthustrel:
:hug: thankies sweetie :smooch:

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Love burns, Ale Burns, Fire Burns, Politics burns... but life is cold without them.

Remember Kids. Growing old is mandatory, growing up is optional. :boogie::dance:
:iconjolanthustrel:
:hug: thankies panda :smooch:

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Love burns, Ale Burns, Fire Burns, Politics burns... but life is cold without them.

Remember Kids. Growing old is mandatory, growing up is optional. :boogie::dance:
:iconartheeria:
*preen* You are most welcome

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"If you can't be the best, than just be useful. Otherwise, I'll have to kill you."
~Assirra Xorlarrin

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